The beat came
from within
deep, resonating
harmonic intervals
of love breaths
taking her by surprise
shivering her stable
hum of life
©MidwestFantasy
03/18/2017
The beat came
from within
deep, resonating
harmonic intervals
of love breaths
taking her by surprise
shivering her stable
hum of life
©MidwestFantasy
03/18/2017
Midwest Fantasy Writes 
Goosebumps
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Love this, love your turn of phrase, love the complex simplicity of feelings. ❤
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So happy you liked it Jack. Thank you🌹
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shivering her stable hum of life…
doesn’t this say everything about the allure of passion that sits like a quiet animal inside the cage of daily life, the fine fibers of clothing like thin prison bars to contain a heart wanting to beat out of its own chest?
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Ooo I like what you said there. “Cage of daily life” is right, and it doesn’t sit with me to be caught in it.
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Your writing reflects that quite well!
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