This is writing in response to S Francis sailorpoet.com who wrote in response to my post “Luring Me” a few days ago. Haven’t done this much on the blog but giving it a try.
Subtle touches
of lips and tongue
across delicate fruit
laid open for him
swirling thoughts
freely shared
with her body
as a lover
who gives more
than takes
©MidwestFantasy
05/27/2017
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Midwest Fantasy Writes 
He fell in love with her tongue
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Ha
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Hi 😀
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As beautiful here as There young Lady. Forbidden fruit is always the sweetest. Success always dear. 👍
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Hi Clint. TY dear friend. Write with me soon!
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Fantastic attitude.erotica…
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Thank you very much
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Always the right words…. always the right mood…always a beautiful interpretation of a sensual experience….
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Thank you for such kind words🌻
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a man is wishful to be perceived in such notion!
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Oh hi! Very nice… let me see…
if this forbidden fruit
will be the last taste
before the garden
gets stolen back from us
then, each bite, each drip
of sweet juice, each swallow
matters more than the breath
that gasps looking up at the moon
smiling, knowing what day hides
behind light and costumes
the hidden that which lives
on spiting marching time
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Damn…incredible words
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Thank you my Friend! I am thinking about collecting up all of these comments and just sequencing them into a poem to post…
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Could work!
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First though… I am going to simply enjoy the responses… live inside them for a while. Makes me happy, and I hope you a little too. Like a bit of warm sun for a winter heart.
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It is warm sun to me😊☀️
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🤓
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