This was so perfect! You really captured that feeling of wonder and joy along with the “but” that intrudes as the “still small voice” of reality and warning of an ultimate point of decision. So, elegant My Dear!! Few words, say so much. The message of silence and a parting touch. Tag! Your it.
This was a great piece and see – it inspired me!!!
Chuck
I feel the intensity of the affair from the first meeting to the journey through till the ultimate act, is what I still remember after 30 years….short, hot and sweet
Midwest Fantasy Writes 
Ooooohhhhhh….jaw dropped
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Always the worst and yet the ones that I seem to remember the most.
Great post btw!
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Appreciate that. Few words but a lot said.
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And yes… memorable
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This was so perfect! You really captured that feeling of wonder and joy along with the “but” that intrudes as the “still small voice” of reality and warning of an ultimate point of decision. So, elegant My Dear!! Few words, say so much. The message of silence and a parting touch. Tag! Your it.
This was a great piece and see – it inspired me!!!
Chuck
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Sorry! One of those moments where I’ve been rude and couldn’t wait! Pitch me another! LOL!!
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No you’re not rude silly
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Felt that way! I intended it for “Us”, but, you know. LOL!
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I feel the intensity of the affair from the first meeting to the journey through till the ultimate act, is what I still remember after 30 years….short, hot and sweet
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