Sweet Surrender

sweet surrender

It is to you

I surrender

falling in

deeper and deeper

free floating

underneath dreams

where magic exists

and I’m never cold

I want to fall like this


your hand holding mine

let’s leave the world behind

and make our own





(Going to be giving this challenge a try in October)




8 thoughts on “Sweet Surrender

  1. Sweet Surrender is such a great feeling where your love and trust in your beloved let’s you experience
    the free floating of which you write! Such a blissful experience!! Delightfully done, My Dear!!
    Good luck on your poem a day! I have complete faith in you being able to accomplish this!!

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