His hand
sliding ever so slowly
across velvet skin
awakening hushed senses
whispering good morning
to desire’s ears
taking an early walk
around curves and corners
in the exotic land
of her
©MidwestFantasy
03/19/2017
His hand
sliding ever so slowly
across velvet skin
awakening hushed senses
whispering good morning
to desire’s ears
taking an early walk
around curves and corners
in the exotic land
of her
©MidwestFantasy
03/19/2017
Midwest Fantasy Writes 
Beautiful in its subtlety and yet rich in all that implies. This ranks among the best erotic writing, aside from the beautiful flow and choice of words, but also for how it engages the mind and imagination. Excellent.
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I am completely honored by your compliment. I always hope my words can touch those who read it in many ways. Thank you so very much for reading and the feedback. I appreciate it. 🌹
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The pleasure is all mine.
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I love the talking a walk around curves and corners. Section….. beautiful……hopefully there aren’t any STOP signs on the route … 🌹🌹🌹😉😉
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Hi hun. No stops at all…
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‘whispering to desire’s ears’ – a beautiful redolent phrase, matching your whole poem…. and thanks for the follow Fantasy.
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Thank you. And you are moat welcome.
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