20 thoughts on “Distant Heartbeats

  1. Dear Midwest Fantasy! I am so amazingly impressed with Your words and the whole piece! This is so exquisite and elegantly descriptive of a melody in a minor key. Playing keyboards makes this really resonate in my heart! Loved the hopeful ending! Great lines – rhythm blue, notes off key. I have added these to my Word Bank. They say it all. Also, loved – underlying melody, barely audible this is so moving and emotional. Relates to a faintly beating heart trying to hold on! Fantastic!!

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    1. I am thrilled you thought so much of this piece. I like how you describe it as a melody in a minor key. Music has always been a part of my life and it works well with much of what I want to say. And how cool you have a Word Bank! Thanks so much for these kind words.

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      1. Yes, I truly was transported by Your words to a special place of joy while reading it, and after! It was like a melody. Beautiful, wistful and haunting! Truly so Great! Yes, I love my Word Bank and it has provided dividends in poems! You should start Your Own! I think You will like it.

        Ok, since You like music, please listen to this in a quiet place with Your eyes shut and drift off. Let me know what You think of it – chucklindholm@hotmail.com


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